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Wednesday, December 11, 2019

Hi my name is Tutoe i go to a blue school i have been doing Reading for 6 years i am a year 6 and my favourite subject is math today i have been reading The Day Mary Shook The Karaka Tree



Writing a new ending for the text writ at least 4 sentence

The girl was walking away and then the girl climbed the tree then the mum came and said what's happened and the girl said the people won’t let me play but i wanted to play too.Come i will help you let’s go play tennis the girl was so happy and gave the mum a very tight hug.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tutoe I love the way you added an introduction at the start. Probably next time you should fix your spelling and put the I in capital.You could add a picture so it looks more cooler.

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