I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, August 30, 2018
My Narrative writing
30th 30/8/18
THE HERO BOY
The kind hero boy lived at the town called The Mysterious with his friend at the rusty old house.The hero oy has strong big abbs he is tall like a enormous dinosaur.Problem-It was a sunny day and the hero boy flew to the shop because he needed some chocolate bar.As he came down he saw some robbers stealing money from the shop man the shop man was working at the warehouse.Solution-The hero boy was angry he he ran so fast like flash he saw the then he got them he puts them in jail.Conclusion-The hero boy enjoyed he yummy chocolate bar then he fell asleep on his bed.
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