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Friday, June 15, 2018

My poem story.

Miss McCormick

She looks so pretty and so awsome and kind.
Her eyes are sparkly like the sun.
She smells like roses flower.
She moves like a lightning boal.
Her touch feel like soft marshmallow voice.
Her basket is full of aroha and happiness.
Her voice sound like a pretty Miss McCormick and she says kind things to other people.

3 comments:

  1. I love how you said (Her touch feels like a soft marshmallow voice.) All of this is really true she really is a wonderful, great teacher.

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  2. Hello Tutoe I really like the way that you said all that kind stuff about Miss McCormick I also think that you should add what kind things she says this also reminds me of a time when Miss McCormick said that we could play games outside I really like your work Tutoe nice!

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  3. Kia Ora Tutoe I really like the way you said all that nice things to Miss McCormick which is true. Maybe next time you could write how she lets us play when we've done our basic facts. This reminds me of when she let us play the whole math session, because she was testing people.

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